Sunday, May 16, 2010

Text production for Television Viewing (Argumentative) #1

Since its invention, television has gained overwhelming product loyalty from people from all walks of life as it is fascinating (Leigh 2001). This is partly due to the fact that consumers can employ it effortlessly. To operate a television set, all the audience need to do is to press the button. It is also easy to search television programs matching with an individual’s tastes and preferences (Rutherford 2002). The high accessibility of television is proven by the estimation that at least one television set is available in more than 90% households in developed nations (Sharif 1999). Nevertheless, it is a fallacy to speculate that only children love television. This is evidenced by both Time Use Surveys conducted by US and UK governments. Statistics obtained shared the same trend whereby the adults spent the most hours daily during leisure time in watching television programs. However, extensive television viewing among the children has remains controversial as it does more harm than good.

First of all, watching television programs uncontrollably can adversely affect mental and physical health of the children especially when the programs are inappropriate to be viewed. Their personalities are being molded at the tender age. Hence, their mentality can be influenced easily by television programs because “seeing is believing”. For instance, the profuse violence content in a show is capable of generating immunity towards violence. Violence is thus deemed by the children to be part and parcel of life and an ideal option to deal with problems. Besides that, ‘Friends’ has always solved problems within half an hour. Consequently, children have set in mind that life struggles can be overcome easily. However, once the reality is against their will, they become discouraged instantly. Apart from that, kids are physically inactive in front of the idiot box (Sharif 1999). As they indulge in snacks while enjoying television, problems such as unfavourable weight gain and related diseases come in (Rutherford 2002).

Secondly, television viewing is able to shape the behaviour of a child. It is a catastrophic disaster when television becomes the only companion of children. Their lives can be jeorpadised when they try to imitate dangerous actions carried out by their favourite characters. Disciplinary problems can occur if they follow the behaviour of a bad character. Furthermore, in most movies the roles in life have been narrowed to certain genders. People are being simply categorized. These can lead to unwise behaviours among the children towards others and themselves (Sharif 1999).

Last but not least, sitting in front of television for the programs broadcasted can also reduce the span of children’s attention upon a task (Sharif 1999). As a result, they cannot concentrate on their homework for a long period of time. Even the educational psychologist has iterated that most of the television-addicts have poor academic achievements at school (Leigh 2001). The indicator of addiction towards television is the withdrawal symptoms when its viewing is forcibly made unavailable (Rutherford 2002). The passive activity has grabbed away the imaginative skills which are essential to spruce up in problem-solving and organizational ability among the future generations (Leigh 2001).

In conclusion, the disadvantages of viewing television outweigh its advantages. Children’s ways of thinking, health, behaviour and academic performance can be adversely affected by watching television programs without selection particularly. Watching television should not be the only option during leisure time. More interesting and healthy activities have to be introduced into the lives of the children.

1 comment:

  1. Overall, the essay is well written and quite convincing. The introductory sentence and thesis statement are well written. A clear stand is made in the essay and at the conclusion the thesis statement is clearly restated. Well done.
    There are several grammatical errors. In the 1st paragraph, the” remains” should change to “remained”. The “does more harm….”also should change to “brings more…”.
    In the 2nd paragraph, the idiot box should be changed to idiot boxes. (plural) “Besides that, ‘Friends’ has always solved problems within half an hour.” This sentence sounds weird, I think you can add “the programs broadcasted like ‘Friends’……” to improve this.
    There is one sentence that I think not clear. “Their personalities are being molded at the tender age.” I cannot really understand the meaning of this sentence. Not tender means kind, gentle and loving?
    The use of the word “immunity” in the second paragraph I think not suitable. Check out the meaning of “immunity”….haha
    In the 3rd paragraph, “in most movies” I think should be change to “in most of the movies”.
    This all are only the mistakes I can point out, haha. A good essay, well done.

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